The website includes key information about what the course covers, how students can benefit, and what requirements they must meet.

All ideas are related to the topic, which keeps the reader focused.

However, most paragraphs are short and factual; they could be expanded with examples or stories from real students.

The student could also include some cultural connections, such as how the course relates to First Peoples’ traditions or perspectives.

The transitions between sentences are logical, but adding linking phrases (e.g., “In addition,” “This means that…”) would make the text flow better.